Graduating in 2012..... for Mr. Romero

Mr. Romero can you grade me on my introduction and voice.

Studies have proven that four out of every ten students drop out of high school. This rate is constantly increasing every school year. Well at least I know that I wont be contributing to that unwanted rate. I am making myself a promise that I will graduate Constitution High School in the year 2012. I am so sure about this because I have a supportive family, I take my education seriously and I believe within myself.


My family is the main reason why I go to school. If it wasn't for my mother and father who enrolled me into school, I wouldn't be here in the first place. They are constantly encouraging me to try my best at everything I do. But when it comes to school they want me to try a little bit harder to get good grades. I also do not want to disappoint them. And they reward me to something nice, whenever I accomplish something good in school. That helps me stay focus in school in order to receive those rewards and graduate.

Another reason why I will graduate in the year 2012 is because I take my education seriously. I do not like to fail tests and get low grades. That doesn't make me feel successful, and whenever I do fail a test I ask the teacher for extra credit to boost my grade up, in order for me to pass. Barack Obama recently stated that education is the most important thing needed in life. You need it to get a good job, and it basically predicts your future life. That's why I will never take my education for granted because it is something that I need.

The last reason why I will graduate in the year 2012 is because I believe in myself. If I believe in myself I can achieve almost anything. If I believe that I will graduate, I know i will. I just have to set my mind to graduating high school, and it can and will happen.

If anybody is having problems in school, just believe in yourself and try your best. That's what I did. With a supportive family, and a mind that is set to accomplishing you can do anything you want. And for myself with that strategy I know that I will graduate in 2012.